topic Re: critique about some work in Visualization

critique about some work

Anonymous — Thu, 11 May 2023 11:40:36 GMT

Hi guys,

I'm been away for a while, since i've been doing a lot of work in college and in some particular projects. I just wanna share with U some of my latest work and get UR valuable opinions. Since I get my copy of Arltantis Attitude from Dwight my rendering skills have improved, not completely yet, but I'm doing my best. Thanks!

Everythig here has been worked with Archicad, Arltantis and Photoshop!

The photo links (some images are more big than 256 kbs LOL) are here:

http://twitpic.com/t9067 -----> This is from a House in Morelos, México
http://twitpic.com/t90g3 -----> This is from my last College project
http://twitpic.com/t9186 -----> This also is from mi last College project
http://twitpic.com/t92fy ------> This also is from mi last College project
http://twitpic.com/t93b5 ------> This also is from mi last College project

Hope U like it guys

Ricardo

Re: critique about some work

Dwight — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 22:06:32 GMT

Your work shows definite artistic attitude. You substitute photoshop tricks for true photo realism, complicating the critique.

Tell me about your attitude to communicating architectural space.

Re: critique about some work

Anonymous — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 22:50:48 GMT

Hi Dwight:

Well all started when I tried to mix my personal touch in some photos i've made (recently I bought a camera and i fall in love with panoramic views). When I started to use more Photoshop more often I really liked the result of overlaying textures with the original picture, adding some watercolor, etc. This started with some pictures of myself (as you can see on my pictures in Twitpic, the one with the oval frame it's me) and after a little time I've decided that a single render can be worked in a way that makes it more like an illustration than a render, I think that a client likes more oftenly an "artistic" work that a single render, this has worked out for me. I'm really thankful specially for U, because your book is amazing it has helped me a lot and I'm still reading and re-reading it to improve my skills. Hope this answer is what U was asking for

Re: critique about some work

Dwight — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 01:05:34 GMT

So, how satisfied are you with these works?

Re: critique about some work

Anonymous — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 06:05:29 GMT

Right now, I'm very satisfied with my work; when I look back 6 months ago and compare my work I realize I've improved a lot in the quality of my presentations, however I'm always looking to improve my skills. Who knows what I'm going to do in another 6 months... well I'll tell U in 6 months!!