critique artlantis rendering

[Anonymous]

Here is a model, I'm trying in my first rendering in Artlantis. I like to make the best presentation to the client. Please review my model and critique/give recommendations on lighting, feel,color, camera position,etc…

Thanks.
Using AC 12, Artlantis 1.2

[Anonymous]

Some points that need improvement:

You use too much light compared to your background image. Lower the intensity if the sunlight to match it with the background image.
The direction of the sun differs from your background image.
Lower your camera to human height; eyelevel, to make it more realistic.
You use a wideangle lens. Your building changes into a doll house compared to your background image, so change the lens angle to let it match.

I hope this helps you

Sjaak

[Anonymous]

made a little improvement on light and viewpoint here to make a final output.