Changes:
--Little dull - fixed in photoshop
-- cropped to subject ("think like a magazine editor") to eliminate black room on right and tighten focus (while keeping a little of everything from the original view - ceiling also unimportant in rendering - in future, tilt camera down to emphasise more important room elements)
-- did a blue color burn down from upper left
-- did a brown color burn up from foreground
-- overexposed display screen - good light on ceiling from display - are you using my plasma screen trick?
-- added second wine glass because if drinking alone in rec room on saturday night watching blue tinted minority report science fiction or whatever, who needs a glass? Suggest adding cheezits bag made with mesh tool and telephone that is not ringing to clarify the story.
Stuff done well:
-- compatible color scheme adds serenity
-- nice wall texture - where from?
-- suitable designery fabric on suitably designer sofa
A generally superior job acknowledging that in a room with television, the screen is hero.
Dwight Atkinson