New Render (my turn) C & C

[Anonymous]

This is what I came up with Cinema 4D r9. No radiosity just the standard stuff.

Car - Dosch Design Cars 2004
People - Got3D?
Plants - xFrog
Grass - DiTools

Illustration for client to use at city review and for promotional pieces.

This is a 40% the full size was 2550 x 1650 generated for a 11 x 14 color board @ 150 ppi. It took 10 min. to render on a Macintosh G5 dual. Photoshop used for type.

Mark Burginger
Architect

[Rakela Raul]

nice glass reflection

[Anonymous]

Perhaps we could start a caption competition with these submitted renders.

I 'll start it off:

She saying " Hi honey have you not cut the grass yet?"
He replies " Nope been too busy polishing the windows"

only other comment is - What is it with Architects and Helvetica?-
a web designer friend of mine has even commented, that it is hell trying to get architects to use anything other Helvetica, - must be something thats indoctrinated into them during training!

[Anonymous]

Let's see... Plan 2. Is this any better?

[Anonymous]

Plan 1 revisited with what I learned during Plan 2.

[Eduardo Rolon]

The only problem I see is that the horizon is too clean and visible. Looks as if the house is sitting on a plain with no mountains, trees or buildings in the background. I have never forgotten reading in a traditional animation book that you have to have a minimum of three planes in the framing of a shot (foreground, middleground, background).

[fuzzytnth3]

Burginger wrote:
Plan 1 revisited with what I learned during Plan 2.

One thing that doen't look quite right to me is the bush to the right of the picture. It doesn't have a shadow unlike the bushes closer to the house.
It looks like it has just been pasted on to me.

[fuzzytnth3]

Burginger wrote:
Plan 1 revisited with what I learned during Plan 2.

Picking up on what ejrolon said you could use an image like the one I've attached below by applying it to a "wall" opposite your model and behind the camera so it reflects in your house model's windows.

That would both break up your horizons reflected in the large window and imply the model was in a "real" street rather than just a computer world