feedback: 2 renderings attached

[Anonymous]

Hi everyone, looking for some feedback to these renderings, I used AC 9’s Lightworks, normal AC sun, didn’t have time to experiment with the sun and sky objects yet.

[Anonymous]

2nd rendering

[Dwight]

That's a great start. Things will immediately improve if you study the sun and sky objects.

But before, add a little yellow to your sun - by changing the color temprature in the dialof to 5000 or 4000, considering it is toronto and there's smog.

Always, also, as a general rule - put color in the sky.....