Daniel wrote:
BTW this is how it turned out
Huge improvement from the first shot. Good work, Daniel!
A lighting suggestion. If you want a softer shadow line, use more lights in your SunObject and perhaps greater divergence. But, the big one is the dark soffit. A trick posted by one of our ac-talk colleagues is to place another dim sun object, with one sun and not linked to the sun settings, but instead placed at the center of the earth and aiming up. This will brighten overhanging surfaces such as the soffits, which would in real life be brighter due to radiosity of light bouncing off the adjacent wall.
Now that you've got your materials working, the other suggestion is to ponder the composition. Is the front lawn the focus? It's almost 1/3 of the image. But, maybe the fact that the home HAS a front lawn and is isolated from the street by it is a key selling point. I don't know.
Feng Shui talks about the front door being the 'mouth' to the house. Too many Western houses now focus on the garage door rather than the human front door. Particularly with the front door in shadow and the garage in sun light, the story here seems shifted away from the human entry to the vehicle entry. Possibly what you want. Just thought I'd comment on how it comes across.
An additional fill light - Dwight will talk about that - can add some ambient boost to the entry.
Black glass over garage (I hear Dwight saying "sinister") and darkish glass in bay window are a little gloomy and not inviting. Work on brighter reflections and illuminated interior.
One design thing that drives me crazy all the time is brick or stone veneer meant to look like a column that only covers one surface of a corner. If your boss allows the expense, wrapping the brick onto the adjacent wall then at least gives the illusion that the brick is a column and is supportive, rather than a decoration that only works in elevation. (Does the brick on the wall next to the bay wrap towards the front door?) Too many US subdivisions are FILLED with high end homes that have brick or stone on one wall facing the street, with no wrapping and the edges clearly visible from the side, saying "fake, fake, fake". Sure, wrapping is fake ... but at least it looks real.
😉 I saw one home that had brick on three sides ... everything visible from the street ... and the rear was cheap bevel siding and 4x4 treated posts on a wood deck. Their guests don't know they live in a fake home, but the owner's do. Yuck. Sorry. Did I say bad veneers drive me crazy?
Anyway, fantastic progress Daniel.
Karl "looking forward to Dwight's LightWorks book!"
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