This is a good start. I'd like to see a tree along these lines that had a second degree of branching-out before leaves.
Trunk, three to five boughs, then branches.
You have made a trunk with branches.
Sort of like "First Your Socks, THEN Your shoes."
And: a sturdy trunk with a generous, geometric crown - an archtype of a tree.
And: a translucent leaf material
But it should also be lean file-size-wise. How small can you make it?
Dwight Atkinson