Interior render scene

[Anonymous]

This is the last rendering I made. Illustrates a project for interior reconstruction of an apartment I am currently working on.

Modelled in AC, except for the sofa. Sofa is made in Max. Rendered in Max with Vray. Almost no post-processing in Photoshop.

Post it here for two reasons:

1. I will be glad to hear your comments about it. I will especially value the critical ones.

2. Being only vaguely acquainted with LightWorks I would like a comparison with it. Is it possible to make such render in LightWorks? And better? If not, how close to it?

I would like to see LightWorks renders posted here, but not your first steps with it. That's there I stand.

[TomWaltz]

I think it looks pretty good.

I'm curious about the light souce. Is there a huge bank of windows out-of-camera? It looks like there is a lot of sun light coming into the room.

[Rakela Raul]

kliment, do you know if the owner suffer from asthma ?? if he does, the wall to left is a dust collector just in case.

[Anonymous]

Yes, Tom, the whole left side is one big window, divided by the green column. This is the south elevation, fifth floor.

Thanks, Rakela! Right to the point! He doesn't have astma but, please, don't tell him!:)

As for the dust - this is the problem with any shelf. By the way this is a pretty popular dust-collector in Italian design.

[TomWaltz]

Then I'd say it looks dead-on.

You can totally tell that is not an Archicad couch. Much too curved and soft looking to be made with slabs 🙂

It's unfortunate, but the ceiling probably will be that dark in the corner without any extra lamps in the room.

[Anonymous]

Looks great, personally I'd lower the amplitude of the bump mapping on your green plaster material. Also you could possibly widen out the perspective a little bit. the front corner of the couch (which look great, BTW) shows, to me anyway, kind of a harsh perspective. for a more fanciful rendering, you could throw a little bit more defined DoF into the render settings, makes it look mroe realistic in my opinion.

I might be of base with my comments, but you said you wanted some critiques... so there you have everything I could throw at you... bottom line though is that it already looks great. As far as lightworks doing this, maybe tigr, or dwight... but no human could make lightworks do this

cheers,
dan

[Anonymous]

Kliment,

couch is great & lighting
good suggestion to reduce wall roughness/bump slighty
fri material bit too "grey" maybe more stainless steel look perhaps
same with some of the other metals

some ceiling light fittings, & a rug perhaps?

Great work
keep it up

[giza]

Hi Kliment,

nice render
what did you use for lightning? vray light on windows + direct light? or maybe something else
i think the green wall on the right side is not touching the ceiling ,
and the floor texture is kind of streached

in general it is something created much better an faster than with Lightworks, just my opinion

[Anonymous]

Thank you all for your comments! Greatly appreciated and right to the point!

By the way it's a good idea when posting renders to givbe the time it takes to render. For this oneit was 86 minutes.

I'll post a new render when I steal some time. 😉

[giza]

kliment wrote:
..By the way it's a good idea when posting renders to givbe the time it takes to render. For this oneit was 86 minutes

strange 86 minutes is too much i think for this scene at what resolution did you render this scene and what computer you have?

what did you use for your primary and secondary bounce?

.. maybe i'm not asking too much!!